The internet is a place of freedom,
blogs, videos, chat rooms,
you can be anyone you want to be on the internet
and no one knows,
or cares,
what you do.
The internet is a scary place,
because even if you aren't doing anything wrong,
other people are.
People put videos on,
without any care,
they don't want to know what other people think,
they just want to exercise their freedom.
People go to far on the internet,
with what they say,
pictures they put on,
videos they put on,
things they write.
People need to be more careful,
for all of our sakes.
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I like this a lot because it's true, people abuse the internet, and put on videos that shouldn't be there. Your poem is already really good, but it would be really cool if you made it a little less obvious that it's the internet you're talking about, and put an infrence in your poem to the internet.
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ReplyDeleteThis was a great comment on some of the ills of this technology. I like that you have used a critical voice in a creative way here.
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